Lista (08-24-2016)
Some of these changes are extremely offensive.
Why not replace "actor" with "actress"?
"cleaning lady" should not be replaced with "office cleaner" but should be replaced with "Office, hallway, bathroom, lounge, entry and stairway cleaner". Or else we demean them by saying they do little work.
Many "freshman" are actually 2nd and 3rd year students so "first year student" doesn't cut it.
"postal worker"? enough said.
"human" and "human kind" still have the word man in them. It should be "hu". We can't use "hu kind" because people are the scourge of the planet and therefore not kind.
"average person" or "ordinary person"? Demeaning to the self esteem of any reader. Should be replaced with "person extraordinaire"
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Lista (08-24-2016)